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mariahf05 (#1140)
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To begin with, Josh lost his locks, his hair. This happened when he made a bet with JB. JB won the bet and when he went to cut one of the locks off, he cut off to many; thus, leaving Josh very upset. Secondly, Josh lost his dad. Unfortunately, losing his father also meant losing his friend, person to talk to, faithful fan, teacher/coach, and advisor. The loss of his father didn’t all have a negative outcome; Josh then saw basketball as a fond memory of his father, JB and Josh made up, and Josh changes from a boy to “da man”.

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To begin with, Josh lost his locks, his hair. This happened when he made a bet with JB. JB won the bet and when he went to cut one of the locks off, he cut off to many; thus, leaving Josh very upset. Secondly, Josh lost his dad. Unfortunately, losing his father also meant losing his friend, person to talk to, faithful fan, teacher/coach, and advisor. The loss of his father didn’t all have a negative outcome; Josh then saw basketball as a fond memory of his father, JB and Josh made up, and Josh changes from a boy to “da man”.

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